Winter in a bottle 'yo

[gmengfx]

lol ad aint givin up till he the king

[Adhdgfx]

Originally Posted by gmengfx

lol ad aint givin up till he the king

Nobody gets anywhere by quitting sir

[Adhdgfx]

Originally Posted by massillusion

He might be,but he's not lying.Keep at it tho.

Lol dave is my dude we was joking, if you have any feedback for the design that you think I could learn from please feel free to help me man

[Adhdgfx]

Originally Posted by NewMatic22

nice idea, but the splashes and lighting could be better...

How can I improve them man? Or what did you not like? I'll try my best to fix it Thanks

[ChanelDesigns]

What kind of weather is outside btw? I think you should have made the sky blue along with the water, that would make it more epic to have "winter in a bottle". Then it would make more sense to have better lighting eg sun and reflections.

It wouldn't make sense for outside to seem as if it is winter as you have done here. Its a nice concept but I don't like how it was executed.

[Adhdgfx]

Originally Posted by ChanelDesigns

What kind of weather is outside btw? I think you should have made the sky blue along with the water, that would make it more epic to have "winter in a bottle". Then it would make more sense to have better lighting eg sun and reflections.

It wouldn't make sense for outside to seem as if it is winter as you have done here. Its a nice concept but I don't like how it was executed.

all my concepts make little sence when made if I think about it .. Appreciate the feedback though you give some valuable advice I can keep in mind when working on my next project, thanks alot!!!

[massillusion]

The water coming from the bottle is kinda pointless to me. I know that theres water on the outside ,but thats kinda pointless also,unless you move the bear over so the water can be seen better inside . The design inside the bottle is cool but overall it's not well thought out. Chanel Designs sums it up as far as execution goes. The Vignette is not good also and the bottle is just floating even though you have splashes around it. Over all it's just flat and looks like a Erie winter day outside the bottle as well.

[Adhdgfx]

Originally Posted by massillusion

The water coming from the bottle is kinda pointless to me. I know that theres water on the outside ,but thats kinda pointless also,unless you move the bear over so the water can be seen better inside . The design inside the bottle is cool but overall it's not well thought out. Chanel Designs sums it up as far as execution goes. The Vignette is not good also and the bottle is just floating even though you have splashes around it. Over all it's just flat and looks like a Erie winter day outside the bottle as well.

Yeah man you make some great points.. Thanks for the tips bro!