Young Jeezy - Walking On Water

[BpDesigns]

What you all think??

Personally i think this is the best piece of work i have done...

[BpDesigns]

42 Views and not one comment are you kidding me..what kinda forum is this??!!

[massillusion]

I don't like the vignette and the buildings are a bit washed out. The text don't really fit to me,and could be centered better. It's not bad just needs a little more work .

[Pilscy]

lol this should be name "in the water"

[virgildesign]

Originally Posted by Pilscy

lol this should be name "in the water"

lol , yeah not really working with jeezy it would be nice if it was a storm or something ans the title must be hard but i like the idea of it bruh keep it up

[225designs]

yeah all the views were because noone wanted to say anything about it at first

the text is bad and your logo is too close to the edge.i would lower the opacity of it so it doesnt look just wrote right there.

jeezy is not walking on water he is standing in shallow water.

none of your text is centered in the middle of the page

i can tell the water is duplicated and flipped. you should change one side a little bit so that it doesnt look like it.

[Pilscy]

Originally Posted by 225designs

yeah all the views were because noone wanted to say anything about it at first

the text is bad and your logo is too close to the edge.i would lower the opacity of it so it doesnt look just wrote right there.

jeezy is not walking on water he is standing in shallow water.

none of your text is centered in the middle of the page

i can tell the water is duplicated and flipped. you should change one side a little bit so that it doesnt look like it.

Damn this guy just is a cold mutha fcka !! lol he just tells you like it is. damn

[BpDesigns]

no probs thanks for the feed, hey " Rome wasn't built in a day " Remember that...

[225designs]

Originally Posted by Pilscy

Damn this guy just is a cold mutha fcka !! lol he just tells you like it is. damn

im not the only one that is like that though...why else would it have so many views but no comments

[ms_lablanca]

I agree...hes not walking in water. Me personally, it doesnt bother me that the text isnt centered..i prefer it that way....I would def work on blending though....I also agree w/ virgil bout the storm idea.