Main Text (Help/Ideas)

[S_DOT_GFX]

Any ideas on fixing the main text?

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TEXT: The blur is too strong and the kerning could be better.

[GreedyGFX]

Originally Posted by S_DOT_GFX

Any ideas on fixing the main text?

I wanna see a colored version of this..bet it would look dope with good lighting and blending

[DevotedGFX]

I rate it, looks good.. i think maybe you should change the overall colour of the 'takeover' text to a more orange theme than the pinky/red tone.. it would match the rest of the cover if you know what i mean ?

also maybe add a slight colour overlay so theyre not entirely black and white ?

just personal things i'd try out

[S_DOT_GFX]

thanks guys, uploaded a second edit..better?

[DevotedGFX]

yeah it looks a lot nicer with the color bro

[elitegfx]

Really like that second edit you did! Good shit man.